This week our phonic sound is the irrrrrrrrr sound that can be made by er/ar/ir/or/ur/re . You have a copy of the story below in your homework books. Write your own story (called a scaffolded text) using as many words with the er/ar/ir/or/ur/re sound as you can. Post your story as a comment.
Let me tell you the story of yesterday’s burglary. The mystery of the missing silver was discovered by the butler who alerted security. The guards disturbed the burglar as he circled the perimeter fence looking for an escape route.He had entered the house without disturbing a soul. He slithered with uncertainty from room to room until he discovered the Fern family silver.‘Ah, perfect. I’ve come to the end of my search’, he muttered as he stuffed the silver into his sack.The burglar made a hasty exit. As he reached the perimeter fence, he felt a hand on his collar. ‘You have been caught on camera. You must return the silver.’ said the guard sternly.
Once there was an actor calledf Hector who owned a very expensive yacht that he kept in a harbour in Dover. The yacht was worth one million dollars. One day, early in the morning, Hector was on the yacht in the harbour when he saw a stranger....it was a burglar!Hector called the police who arrived in their modern car. The policeman was very stern and arrested the burglar who had stolen a camera from a man in the harbour.
ReplyDeletehi miss spiers I like todays maths
ReplyDeleteLucy was walking down the street when suddenly she saw a stranger and little did she know but the stranger was a burglar! he went into the pet shop and came out with a bulging sack. Hmm I wonder she said is he a burglar? Yes she was right. He looked at her with a hard stare and then walked off. Lucy was suspicious. He walked down near the harbour and got into a boat. I wonder where he is going, said Lucy. She then noticed a peculiar sight. Something started to move in the burglars sack!. . . . . .
ReplyDeletehi!!! thats a cool poem the surprised burglar... ...awsome
ReplyDeleteOnce apon a time there was a monster.He didn't like the number one because he didn't like to be on his own in his life.In summer he went to Lithuania and he saw a beautiful waman from Lithuania.He asked her name, but she didn't understand him.Then he tried for some more times.The monster couldn't learn lithuanian too.So he boutght a dictionary.On Saturday the monster went to her birthday and then the could understand lithuanian better.He will never forget his holiday in lithuania.
ReplyDeletewhen scientits discover the perimiter of northan ireland,it will be my 489th birthday.it will be a saturday. i will look perfect like a million dollar bill.sadly my mother and father will be dead.i will take a picture with mypurple camera.it was a surprise because i read allchapter 10 it had 5 millon and 489 pages i will serve a litre of coke. after me and my partner will surf,early in the morning at 8:30am.i will wear my modern collar.where you wonder? well in newcastle.before we were in portrush.
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Once a upon a time there was a boy called kerb he went to the harbour.Then he wanted to go on the boat but he couldn't because he didn't have a coat. Then he went to his mums work.she worked in government.she came out and they went to a restaurant called pier 36.THE END.
ReplyDeleteone day my mother and father went out sopping and my mother ware her new top and trosers and my father ware his new shoes and then thay asked me would I like to go with they so I said I would
ReplyDeletego with them . THE END