This week we are going to do our texts a little differently. This week, as well as including your spellings in the paragraph, I would like you to use as many synonyms for 'said' as you can and I would like you to use speech marks at least once.
There is a house point for everyone who posts their paragraph here on the blog!
To day I am going to help my mum bake some cakes, I have a lovly apron which has a picture of a rainforest with a snake in the tree . My aim is to bake fairy cakes. My first instrucion is to weigh some flour and well I think you know the rest of it . My mum says I am not alowed near the oven so I have to obey her for safety reasons because if I fail to do this I can get burnt and be in a lot of pain. I hope my cakes are ready so I can take them down to the lake for a picnic with my best friends jenna and hannah.
ReplyDeleteOnce upon a time my Dad was waiting for a plane, but it delayed. So away he went the get a coffee and he made a new mate. They had to stay over night and the next day was Wednesday and it rained all day.Dad yelled "Hiya" to his friend and went over to speak to him.Then Dad got his plane and came home and he brought Mum an apron. THE END
ReplyDeleteOnce upon a time there was a family called the Cerros.They had a next door neighbour, but the bad thing was they were always complaining about silly things.My mum sighed ''why do they complain about silly things.'' Then Laura said ''I don't konw maybe they had an operation on there brains,bcause Ryan came in screaming today I am going Grease, but the next morning he was complaining about his suite-case THE END
ReplyDeleteOn Saturday I was walking along the pavement with my neighbour Kay. She still had her apron on so I asked her "What have you been doing today?" She replied without a delay, "I have been making some buns today." I started to complain and she burst a big vein and never was seen again!
ReplyDeletehiya every1. i was waitin to go to school this morning when i fell and split my chin open- my mum had to bring me to the hospital and i had to get 7 stiches so i am not allowed into school today!! c u later
ReplyDeleteCathy true story bye
We all hope that you are feeling better soon Cathy! We miss you! :)
ReplyDeletehaha thanks fine just we bit sore but i am fine bye c u 2morrrow
ReplyDeleteand i will put up my house point 2morrow
ReplyDeletehello miss spiers i am sick i hope i'll be jumping again soon see you then bye.
ReplyDeleteI was getting ready to go to a football match in Liverpool with my dad. We had to choose a siutable suitcase because I threw the blue one away. I found a wooden one and that was an improvement. we began to cruise towards the airport when my toothpaste began to ooze through the zip. In the moonlight I could see this was not going to be fruitfull. Next the movement made the shampoo explode and I was left with a bruise. I was now in a bad mood and my cruel dad made me go to the match a different route. Next time I think I'll go in a canoe.
ReplyDeleteI was going to the football in Liverpool with my dad. He said "you'd better choose a suitable suitcase because you threw the blue one away." I found a wooden one which was an improvement. Then I shouted "my toothpaste is starting to ooze through the zip!" We continued to cruise along in the car. The movement made my shampoo explode and I ended up with a big bruise.
ReplyDeleteWe all hope you are feeling better soon Lauren! :)
ReplyDeleteLast year I had an idea that I would buy a reptile. I told mymum and she went very silent for a while. "Why would you wantto buy a reptile? It might bite you." I put up a fight that night and mum decided to change her mind! Wait till she finds out that its a crocodile I really want!
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