Tuesday 14 September 2010

The Astounding House


You would never believe that thousands of people would travel over mountains, underground, through clouds and by sea to visit the magical fountain at Slough House.

At noon each day people would surround the fountain at the astounding house and watch as the house changed to a clown. Bounce, the clown would bow to the applause of the crowd and astound the audience with his magic tricks.


Post your phonics paragraphs here. There will be 2 table points for everyone who posts a paragraph.

7 comments:

  1. ``i saw a mouse in the classroom today mum``said charlie to her mum.
    her mum did a big frown and said``really, tell your teacher to call the exstermanater``.
    ``ok``
    ``go get dressed for that party, it`s in have an hour``
    charlie went to the party and had a great time at the party there was a clown he was crowned the best clown in the world.
    the next day she went up a mountin to see the worlds most beautiful fountin the mountin must of been about thousand feet high.
    it was a long waik down and about half way they stoped for a picnic when charlie was finished she asked her mum can she go for a swim in the lake her mum would not allow her to.
    ``now olivia that`s why i`m taking you to see the great fountin i went there when i was a child now come on children.``
    by chloe thompson

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  2. Julie went to a farm. She saw lots of boughs of trees and a farmer getting ready to plough . They drove to the farmhouse. The lady gave them a towel
    to clean them selves. She made Julie do a test. She had to do thousands,tens,units and hundreds and vowels . It was a fair amount. The lady allowed her to draw a mouth. She said Julie should be proud. Julie was astounded and took a bow.


    Dear Miss Spiers, this is my spelling paragraph
    from Hannah

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  3. the amount of people was about one thousand who watched the proud man ploughing the field.The bough of a tree broke and they put a surround around the tree.There was drought when a dark cloud came in the sky and it rained.The man had to dry his face with a towel.He allowed his mate to prowl around the feild with a frown on his face and a pipe in his mouth .He shouted aloud and gave a bow which seemed to astound everyone

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  4. One THOUSAND years ago you had to PLOUGH a field by hand and DISCOUNT was not ALOUD since there was a DROUGHT. This made men FROWN and they had to PROUL. they seen a BOUGH of a boat with a TOWEL hanging on it. People were taking a BOW with and jumping of PROUD and shouting ALOUD. Other people SURROUND the boat with their MOUTH open ASTOUND. THEY had to take into ACCOUNT the AMOUNT of CLOUD coming wich might not ALLOW them to keep jumping and a granny came runny and then tripped over a brick and fell and said " What's a VOWEL.

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  5. One day Howard the Clown had a frown so he hung from the ceiling the wrong way round. No-one could know that he had a frown because everyone knows that a frown is a smile turned upside down. Howard sang a song about vowels aloud and when he got down from the ceiling his frown was the right way around. The crowd were wowed as he took a bow!!!!!!

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  6. one time when a man was driving he saw a cloud shaped like a mouth. The moth was frowning. It made him think of a time were he went to the circus it costed, it costed alot to et in but he was proud because he got a discount

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  7. hi this is emma from p6sm i love ur class blog it is nice fun and cool

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